
I think the flow is pretty good for an amatuer.
My journey deeper into photography, art-making, filmmaking. Practiciing the craft that makes my creative juices flow.
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Notice, if I follow my employer’s script, you might get lost with the continuity by page 2 (when you flip the page) because the word balloon just seems to be floating there. I might add a following panel just to clarify it is the same old man from page 1 playing this kid in tennis. What say you?